Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Whoopee! We've Increased By Three

In honor of my sweet niece, Picket, who may encounter this situation standing in line at the Pig once she's become famous (isn't she already?) enough to be recognized there. Not a humorous poem, but one that will make you stop and think, especially about names and what they mean. (And aren't we still discussing a name for my OTHER niece, Amanda?)

The poem is all about appearance/reality as well. End of poetry lesson.
~~~
Men Who Buy Lunch At The Pig

His eyes are like a flame of fire. . .
and he has a name inscribed that no one knows but himself. . .
-Revelation 19:12

Jeans raveling over their boots,
shirts hanging out of their jeans,
they wear their names stitched on
for forgetful men who pay their wages,
but one in line is startled when he is called
by name, as if he might have worn
the wrong shirt; then he resumes staring
down past the pocket that names him.

Chicken with potatoes and gravy and peas
scooped into sectioned Styrofoam plates
give-away day-old chocolate chip cookies
quarts of drinks for a gallon-sized thirst
and the essential cordial, two packs of Camels,
please

look lady, hurry it up will ya
the others are waiting in the truck
the boss is waiting, and I’m sick
of standing here waiting for you;
you should be the one shoveling dirt,
lady, if you can’t figure one simple price
the only way I’m going to have a good day
is to get out of here in time for a smoke


"Thank you, M’am," he says,
naming her with generic respect,
reaching for his prodigal lunch.
~~~
By the way, why didn't someone worn me that blogging is as addictive as nicotine? I'll work on the old notebook another day. Now I must crack the whip and get myself back to the writing grindstone! Thwack! thwick!

2 comments:

The Quintessential Magpie said...

I loved this, Kathleen! Amazing piece...

XO,

Sheila :-)

Picket said...

lol Oh girl that is funny...but most men down here have 'Bubba' sewn on their belts....I like a Marlboro man myself! lol lol Oh Kat..that was a good one and so real life even at Wal-Mart! lol lol

I been busy painting for the last two days..going alittle more Traditional with my country look..wanting to put the picture frame moldings below the chair rails...it is really brightened things up...hope all is well on your side of the mountain...love to all...Picket